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Kiss of A Queen
« on: December 07, 2015, 04:03:15 AM »
Kiss Of A Queen

Walk with me in the darkness
The sun was always too bright
Walk with me in the shadows
Never again feel a cold winter's night

Let the cold night warm your body
Feel eternity's beautiful embrace
Let it still your beating heart
Everybody wears a mask for a face

Taste the blood of the ages
Don't let time take its toll
Feel the beauty of the lifeless
The key for unlocking your soul

Come a little closer towards me
So we can hold each other tight
Don't be afraid that I'll hurt you
I'll take your senses to a whole new height

We are not what you believe us to be
Forget everything you've heard being said
We are the children of eternity
The true origin of everything you've ever read

Let me drink from you in the moon glow
See how it strengthens your might
You'll learn to embrace the darkness
There's more than one kind of light

Forget what your god has promised you
By the touch of my voice you shall be lead
This is what it means to be chosen
Come with me and walk with the dead

Let go of your misguided morals
A naive view of what's wrong and what's right
Play by a new set of rules
Rules that will allow your spirit to take flight

Enjoy a kiss from the queen of forever
Be the cause not the victim of strife
You'll come to love my soft embrace
And the pure sweet caress of unlife

Take my hand for all time
Take your last deep breath
Kiss good bye to your old life
Let me show you the power of death

I'll be with you in the darkness
But always be ready to fight
And when the mortals attack us
Kill everything in sight



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Come with me in the darkness
I'll show you how to do this right
Not to rough to start with though
My tasty treat is still rather tight

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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #1 on: December 07, 2015, 07:17:53 PM »
Er... perhaps that last stanza is a little too "adult" for this forum, compadre...   :-[ 


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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #2 on: December 07, 2015, 11:13:01 PM »
I agree it is a bit "adult" for the forums. I have edited the stanza to be color blocked for now.

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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2015, 12:00:24 AM »
Fine but don't sneak up on me in the darkness
You gave me a hell of a fright
Wear a bell around your neck please
Er... I want to go fly a kyte

Er... perhaps that last stanza is a little too "adult" for this forum, compadre...   :-[
Really? A tongue in cheek reference to an act of affection within the context of a non-interactive story is too adult but playing interactively through the acts of stabbing people, clubbing them with blunt objects and burning them (often not killing them but leaving them dying on the floor) isn't?

I agree it is a bit "adult" for the forums. I have edited the stanza to be color blocked for now.
That's okay, it's not actually part of the poem and I think it might make it funnier anyway. :)
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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2015, 01:34:11 AM »
Er... perhaps that last stanza is a little too "adult" for this forum, compadre...   :-[
I must admit, that was my reaction too. It is not just the concepts but equally the language used to describe them. We are pretty prudish around here (I guess).

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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2015, 02:41:50 AM »
Er... perhaps that last stanza is a little too "adult" for this forum, compadre...   :-[
I must admit, that was my reaction too. It is not just the concepts but equally the language used to describe them. We are pretty prudish around here (I guess).
Better? ;D
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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #6 on: December 08, 2015, 03:43:01 AM »
so i looked very brief on youre module what is that about getting smashed to death by a horde of goblins ??

you get weapons you have no armor and what is the point to that combat anyhow ?????

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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #7 on: December 08, 2015, 04:22:08 AM »
Wrong topic, wrong forum.

Why does nobody think to rest and memorise spells before that fight?

Celestrion's going to be able to sweep them in the revised version so that will make it easier.

What's the point of any combat? I liked the idea of throwing them in the deep end straight away and it gives the player a second club if they've got more than one cleric.

You improve your equipment as you go along rather than being able to buy what you like from the start.
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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #8 on: December 08, 2015, 06:18:15 AM »
Okay I've just done some of the most important changes based on the feedback I've been getting. I won't upload it to rosedragon until I've made the changes for later in the module as well but this should make a big difference to the earlier stages.

1. Put the monsters back to standard, allowing goblins and kobolds to be swept by Celestrion.
2. Put text outside the Hap buildings so the player knows what's where without having to go inside.
3. Put warnings in the cave for the tough fights.
4. Changed the position of the cave entrance so it's the same as CotAB.
5. Fixed a couple of small bugs and typos I missed.

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Edit:
Don't move your save files over if you have Alissia in the party unless you want to edit the cave dungeon event on the entrance square. I moved her down a slot so now she won't get removed.

Re-Edit:
You might want to rename goblin guards to goblin warriors, give them shields and improve their AC by one so they match the combat icons, I forgot to do that. Not too much of a problem though, you can still get shields from the kobolds.
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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #9 on: December 08, 2015, 10:04:58 AM »
Better? ;D
 

Oui   ;) 

It is a grey area, especially on this particular board, since it's fiction and we want our authors to be able to express themselves.  My belief is that we do our community the best service, tho, by keeping the forum fairly "family friendly." 

That doesn't mean we all must become "prudes," but simply be considerate of others, including minors. 

In fact, as far as our mods go, we have some that are quite "adult" in nature.  Of particular mention are some of the designs of Harri Polsa (adult themes, language, and situations, but exceptionally well-done, and full of artistic merit).  Our suggested rule has only been that authors should somehow conspicuously label such mods as containing such content.   

In fact, my last mod for OAUA, "The Snow Woman's Daughters" very much required such a warning (or advisory), and the mod I'm currently working on will need one, as well.   :P

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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #10 on: December 08, 2015, 10:49:32 AM »
Really? A tongue in cheek reference to an act of affection within the context of a non-interactive story is too adult but playing interactively through the acts of stabbing people, clubbing them with blunt objects and burning them (often not killing them but leaving them dying on the floor) isn't?


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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #11 on: December 08, 2015, 05:21:55 PM »
I wish I hadn't posted that last verse now. I wouldn't have if I'd known how controversial it would be. It's not actually part of it, it's a joke.
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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #12 on: December 08, 2015, 05:53:48 PM »
I wish I hadn't posted that last verse now. I wouldn't have if I'd known how controversial it would be. It's not actually part of it, it's a joke.

Not controversial, really. Which is why I only obfuscated the stanza rather than draconicaly removed it.

It comes down to more of a cultural taboo on overly explicit sexual themes on an all-ages type of open forum, whether it makes sense as opposed to the same cultural acceptance of violence or not. Had the revised stanza been the original, I probably wouldn't have color-blocked it ... it was the more explicit nature that warranted it by the forum's "rules".  (And your revised stanza is actually quite poetic in the vein of the previous verses.)

Honestly, it was not that big of a deal. No one was offended I think. I hope.

At least you didn't go the man from Nantucket route. :p

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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #13 on: December 08, 2015, 06:15:52 PM »
I'm really happy with the middle three, although I didn't write the middle one. I don't like the last line of the first one but I can't think of anything better.
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Re: Seduced By A Vampire Queen
« Reply #14 on: January 01, 2016, 02:39:16 PM »
Old version.


Seduced By Darkness

Walk with me in the darkness
The sun was always too bright
Walk with me in the shadows
See how it strengthens your might

Forget what your god has promised you
By my voice you shall be lead
This is what it means to be chosen
Come with me and walk with the dead

Step into the darkness
Say good bye to the light
We live in an eternity
Where every day is night

Take my hand forever
Take your last deep breath
Kiss farewell to your old life
Let me show you the power of death

I'll be with you in the darkness
But always be ready to fight
And when the mortals attack us
Kill everything in sight



I didn't write the middle verse, I wrote around it. It was inspired by the pic that's now my avatar. I used to be into warhammer and the second verse is referencing the fact that she's trying to seduce a chaos lord (your god, chosen) to create an undead chaos army but it works nicely (maybe even better) without that link.
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